gửi bạn lưu hiếu
Đây là bài bạn
With me , I think if teacher giving to student to much of homework will make them boring in learning . You know that student like us having more than 5 homework a day . Math , English , Vietnamese we leanrt that all days . If we do too much of homework it will make us stressful . With all the information , I hope that teacher won't giving us too much of homework .
Thanks Alot !
Đây là bài mình sửa
With To me ( mình nghĩ không cần To me ở đây đâu .Bắt đầu với I think là được rồi) I think, if teachers giving (bạn dùng câu điều kiện loại 1, nhưng sai cấu trúc rồi .) give to their students too much of (bỏ of) homework ,it will make them the students boring feel bored ( nếu bạn dùng boring thì nghĩa sẽ là làm cho the students thành những người nhàm chán, không phải cảm xúc của the students) in learning. You know(cái này dùng trong văn nói) that the students like us having have more than 5 lots of homework a day like :Maths , English , Vietnamese literature (ngữ văn) so we leanrt have to learn that all the days . If we do too much of homework it will make us stressful feel stressed. With all the information , I hope that teachers won't giving will not give us too much of (bỏ of) homework .
Thanks Alot a lot ! ( a lot phải có dấu cách)