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My favorite TV program is Hello Jadoo - a famous program. I like this program because it is very funny and exciting. It's on Disney Channel at 5pm from Tuesday to Saturday every week. I always watch it . This program is about a cute girl, funny and intelligent but quite lazy and friends good-hearted, genial of jadoo. Through cartoon, I developed communication skills, perseverance and life skills. I wish cartoon will premiere viewers more

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My favorite TV program is Hello Jadoo - a famous program. It's a animation film. This film is about a cute girl, funny and intelligent but quite lazy and friends good-hearted, genial of jadoo. It's on Disney Channel daily at 5pm from Tuesday to Saturday every week. I always watch it. Critics say the film is gripping and entertaining.  I like this program because it is very funny and exciting. Through cartoon, I developed communication skills, perseverance and life skills. I wish cartoon will premiere viewers more.