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Hello everyone! My name is Rin, from class 7E. Now, I will tell you my perfect birthday party.
My birthday is on July 18th. This year, it was organized in my living room. There were about twenty-five people coming to my party, including my friends, my relatives and some kids in the neighbourhood. My party wasn’t decorated with balloons and ribbons because I don’t like motley. I only arrange candies on the table with the big birthday cake in the middle.
To start the party, we sang the birthday song. After that, I blew eleven candles, then, I cut the birthday cake and shared it to everyone. We ate cake, candies and play hide-and-seek. Everyone looked happy. At the end of the party, all of us took lots of photos to keep those sweet moments. I also received many gifts from the guests. When it was dark, I said goodbye to them. That was the most wonderful party I’ve had in my life.