Topic: Write about the volunteer work you want to do.

Question

mọi người giúp mình viết topic nha mình cần gấp lắm! Mơn m.n nhiều^^

Answer 1

I want to help those who are struggling in life. I want to do it because not for the money that is charitable as providing food and clothing for the winter when they do not get cold. I will mobilize people to donate money to the poor. I like to do this charity because I can devote a part of the country even if nothing more!
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Comments

được nhưng bạn còn sai ngữ pháp. Bạn coi lại dòng đầu tiên, ta dùng not because chứ ko phải because not. Chỗ I like to do this charity... bạn nên ghi là I'd like. Còn lại ổn. Duyệt!!!

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Answer 2

You know, we are really lucky enough to have enough things to get a happy life. Besides, have we ever thought of the ones who are not as lucky as us and right now, they are wandering along the streets with a blue cold face because of the rain and also with just loose clothes and somes are trying to begging people to give them money? No, we never. Our country is developing but there are still so many homeless people. To make the community better, we should do something to our community to make a difference. To me, I love donating money to help the homeless people and help them find proper accomodations, food and well-paid jobs. It must be a huge amount of money but I'll ask my friends to donate too. I ensure that many people will enjoy the organisation. When we're successful in our local areas, we will travel across the country to ask people to donate more. Afterwards I think we can help homeless people with such huge money like that.......

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