Bn nào nhanh mình sẽ tick bài hay nhất ( trước 11h cho mình nhé)

Question

viết 1 đoạn văn bằng tiếng anh về kí ức đẹp nhất của bạn ( ít nhất là 350 từ)

Answer 1

I have a memorable childhood which has many experiences. One of the experiences I remember most is the first time I was invited to a birthday party. I was a 6-year-old girl and I had a bestfriend whose name is Lisa. We were very close and seemed we couldn’t live without each other until her birhtday. It was a beautiful morning when Lisa invited me to her birthday party and had no idea about how great her party would be if she didn’t ask me to attend. I was very happy and decided to make my bestfriend surprise by giving her a puppy as a present. Lisa didn’t like dog or any animal but I almost forgot about that. I was confident to give her my present in her birthday and immediately realized that she didn’t like my little dog which I myself chose to buy 3 days ago. While the party was going on, I stood in a corner of the room and watched how much she loved other normal presents such as teddy bear, dolls or crayons. I felt dissapointed but that was not the worst thing. About 20 mintues later, Lisa’s father gave a sign that was the time to taking out a birthday cake. It was the biggest birthday cake I had ever seen. The light went off. As soon as it went on, somebody screamed “It’s a puppy in the cake”. Everyone was surprise and they recognized that was my puppy. They looked at the puppy and then looked at me. I glanced to Lisa. She said nothing and about to cried. I was very confused and ashamed. I carried my puppy, said sorry to Lisa and ran out of the party. I couldn’t believe that I had just broken my bestfriend’s birthday cake because of a silly decision. I learned that never bring any animal with me to a party, especially bestfriend’s birthday party. It’s an experience that I won’t forget for the rest of my life. Luckily Lisa forgave me and we are still friend up to now. She always reminded me about her 6th birthday and we laughed a lot. 

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Answer 2

That morning, people in the neighborhood do not understand why kids to go out so early. On hand children a boy, every man holding a broom and pick up sticks in the first concentrate output. Uncle Hai, head of the neighborhood passing by asked: "You do that standing here?" I quickly answered Uncle: "Last night, we agreed to meet him here this morning to clean the neighborhood doctor sir! "" Oh, good children too! Physicians have a compliment. Be careful not to miss the accident second "On the road in their neighborhood as long as l00m children, kids pick up bags of pus swab, children cultivate sweep garbage heaps one, put it in the trash, work-speak truth straw. Just over an hour later, the road was squeaky clean. The notes she passed by, everyone gave a compliment: "The kids are really good!" Who does, this race smiled happily at each other.